近期去參加托�？荚嚨膶殞殏円恢痹趩柇h(huán)球教育蘇州學(xué)校朱丁琦老師：托福提分要點(diǎn)是什么呢？為什么我之前隨隨便便都可以到20+，怎么現(xiàn)在不行了？是不是考試變難了啊? 為什么我背模板木有用了？托福提分要點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵在哪里？
帶著這樣的問題，為了解答同學(xué)們關(guān)于托福提分要點(diǎn)的疑問，朱老師踏上了去成都SAT/TOEFL年會(huì)的道路，在與諸位業(yè)內(nèi)的大咖們交流以后，筆者充分驗(yàn)證了自己對(duì)于托�？荚嚨恼J(rèn)知：托福考試中聽說讀寫四項(xiàng)科目其實(shí)是不能簡單分割，作為一項(xiàng)語言能力考試，如果好好地把輸入型的考試內(nèi)容（閱讀和聽力）好好學(xué)習(xí)并且模仿，就可以在很大程度上提升輸出型考試項(xiàng)目（寫作，口語）。
那么如何在茫茫學(xué)海中找到適合自己的托福提分要點(diǎn)的寫作模板捏？難不成在忙碌的托福備考中還要再去翻閱Economist（經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人）還有Time （時(shí)代周刊）嗎？
其實(shí)不用如此大費(fèi)周章，直接從我們的托福閱讀中就可以獲得超贊的寫作模板啦。
如TPO 27 Prey and Predator System，仔細(xì)看一下這個(gè)文本，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，本段的第一句作為中心句的存在很明確出predator在維持生態(tài)多樣性上的作用。
然后第二句就通過條件句without表明沒有predator帶來的后果，起到了解釋說明的作用。
之后進(jìn)一步用因果關(guān)系解釋了參與主體（predator）的重要性，其后立刻舉例說明，最后用therefore總結(jié)全段。這個(gè)段落其實(shí)就是很明確托福寫作主體段的論證順序。
把上述閱讀文本總結(jié)一下，托福提分要點(diǎn)就很清晰，就可以得出以下一個(gè)寫作框架~細(xì)讀一下，這其實(shí)不就是屬于我們的另類寫作框架嗎？ 還是由ETS官方自己公布的，不能再贊了。
A is an essential factor in XX. Without A, XX can have a major impact on XX, resulting in a negative effect on ....However, if A 存在，then....Thus, ....For example, XX. Therefore, from the stand point of XX, it is .....
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: A university should focus more on its facilities, such as libraries, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers. (2015.10.24)
如果選擇大學(xué)，要更注重基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施建設(shè)的話，就是設(shè)施對(duì)于學(xué)校額重要性。有了這些設(shè)施，老師和學(xué)生都可以進(jìn)行更多的學(xué)術(shù)研究與學(xué)習(xí)。如果有的話老師和學(xué)生就可以獲得更多的學(xué)術(shù)成就了。
Facilitation is an essential factor in academic behavior of both students and teachers. Without those infrastructures, the lack of study resources can have a major impact on academic behavior, resulting in a negative effect on academic achievement. However, if there were enough facilitators，then students are more likely to dig for the information they are interested and teachers, including professors and tutors, are likely to obtain more accomplishment. Thus,it is extremely necessary for universities to devote fund in facilitators. For example, the installation of computers not only enables those students access to the latest information regarding their major but aslo allows those professors to update their discoveries. Therefore, from the stand point of better schooling result, it is inevitable for the universities to lay more emphasis on basic
這樣寫是不是很簡單捏？托福提分要點(diǎn)是不是很好掌握了。其實(shí)各位備考的同學(xué)在準(zhǔn)備時(shí)一定要做好閱讀和聽力的輸入，精讀托福閱讀文章，理解中心句和支撐句的關(guān)系并且進(jìn)行模仿，那么就可以快速提升寫作成績。