當(dāng)一位托�？忌�有基本的表達(dá)能力，可以較多的用到答題時間，口語這一塊一般都能拿到十幾分；但他若想拿到二十分以上乃至24+，則需要在流利度和語調(diào)上有更好的表現(xiàn)以及注意一些高分技巧。環(huán)球教育徐品品老師就技巧之一——細(xì)節(jié)描述來談一談。
托�？谡Z的很多題目，尤其是獨(dú)立口語部分，要求同學(xué)們在作答中給出細(xì)節(jié)。細(xì)節(jié)描述可以有兩個作用：一是讓作答更完整，二是能更好地展示作答者的語言水平；這些可以通過細(xì)節(jié)描述的兩個主要方式來得到體現(xiàn)。
一、使用有更強(qiáng)表意能力的形容詞或副詞
具體做法是把一些常用的形容詞或副詞替換為它們更精確的近義詞，如：
good -- great, valuable, practical, talented, inspiring etc.
bad -- difficult, unpleasant, frightening, depressing etc.
nice (for a person) -- kind, helpful, encouraging, generous etc.
nice (for an object) -- amazing, extraordinary, wonderful, useful etc.
well (adverb) -- skillfully, quickly, efficiently etc.
二、使用介詞短語或從句來做定語或狀語
具體做法是當(dāng)表達(dá)的句子過于簡單時，我們多用一些介詞短語或從句來表達(dá)時間、地點(diǎn)、原因、目的、方式等信息，或者用它們來替換本來想使用的單個形容詞或副詞。
接下來我們來看幾個使用這兩種細(xì)節(jié)描述的例子；這些例子中的原表達(dá)來自于一些學(xué)生最初的作答，根據(jù)他們的原意，在不添加句子數(shù)量的情況下（所以可能用不完答題時間），僅通過增加細(xì)節(jié)描述來完成進(jìn)階版的表達(dá)：
1.What was the most useful class that you took in high school? Give reasons for your response.
原表達(dá)：Typing was a good class because I learned a lot. It was hard, but I'm glad that I worked hard and made progress. Now I can type well without looking at my hands.
進(jìn)階表達(dá)：Typing was a practical class because I learned a lot of word-processing skills. It was a difficult class with daily homework assignments, but I'm glad that I worked hard and made significant progress. Now I can type quickly, easily and accurately without looking down at my hands.
2.What is your favorite activity to do by yourself? Give reasons to explain your answer.
原表達(dá)：I like to watch American TV series when I am alone. I can find a lot of good characters and enjoy good stories. It doesn't cost much. It is a nice way to learn English.
進(jìn)階表達(dá)：I like to watch American TV series in the weekend when I am alone. I can find a lot of interesting characters and enjoy amazing and exciting stories. It doesn't cost much because we can download them on line, which is convenient, and I also enjoy it because it is helpful to English learning.
3.Talk about a relative who taught you something important. Explain what you learned.
原表達(dá)：I learned how to be patient from my uncle. He's a good man. He doesn't get angry. He rarely feels stressed.
進(jìn)階表達(dá)：I learned how to be patient from my uncle. He's an excellent example of a patient man. He doesn't get upset or angry when plans change or things go wrong. He rarely feels stressed.
4.Talk about an interesting place that you have visited. Use details in your response.
原表達(dá)：I went to Paris. It was nice. It was large. I saw a lot of things. I ate some good food, and I met some nice people.
進(jìn)階表達(dá)：I went to Paris for two weeks when I was in high school. It was a wonderful experience. It was the largest city I had ever visited. I saw a lot of famous monuments and museums. I ate some fancy French food, and I met some friendly French people my age.